Frizzle Frazzle Frumph
I think I've had just enough
Slicked back battle fur
Missing whiskers. Outcast stoop.
Back to the shadows again
Taking what life throws at me one pitch at a time
Frizzle Frazzle Frumph
I think I've had just enough
Slicked back battle fur
Missing whiskers. Outcast stoop.
Back to the shadows again
I think this is a fabulous tanka! The alliteration in the first line is simply purrfect! πββ¬
πΊ MeowπΊ
Terrific tanka!
Thank you for reading and commenting. I was going to say, “A million tankas” , but that would just be me being silly. Cheersπ
Come here, little kitty. You can stay with us. πΊ
Is that a cat call? π
I love this! You caught everything I see in the photo! I love that he goes back into the shadows.
Thanks so much. If all dogs go to heaven, does that mean all cats go back to the shadows? I guess they do in my haiku havenπ
Aw, poor cat! Your tanka captures the photo perfectly, Peter!
Yvette M Calleiro π
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Brilliant, Peter, I love the pace and the capture. Cheers! π
Love this ππ